The Ladies of Horror
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Even the Cake was in Tiers
by Amanda Worthington
You can’t help what you’ve become, he’d said, voice gentle
Full of heartbreak and self-loathing and love
He’d reached out to caress her bare shoulder
Like the contact would bring absolution for his absence
The night she’d been bitten or scratched or stung
Or however she was made into this husk before him now
Pale and thin and wrung-out
.
She’d shrunk away from his touch
And he’d have let her drain every ounce of his blood
Endured the hard road of immortality
Or whatever curse disguised as a blessing
Waited on the other side
All in exchange for a smile, a kiss, a sigh
.
Once, they’d spoken of fleeing the busy-ness of their big city existence
Hiding out in the mountains of Alaska for awhile
But the idea of a midnight sun terrified her into silence
When he brought it up
He was quiet more often these days
Knew he should speak, but wasn’t sure what he should say
.
He was a pastry chef, not a shrink.
And naturally, that realization brought to mind cake
He baked while she slept
Had just lit the last of the candles
As rubbing sleep from her eyes, she came into the room
She blinked several times
Her lips pulled into a taut smile
As she beheld the love of her life
Dressed almost like he was playing at groom
.
“I’m not asking you to make me like you
But will you do the honor of this dance
And this cake that is the purest way
I can think of to love you the way I know how”
.
There were tears in his eyes as he reached out a hand
Drew her close, kissed her wan cheek
And she let herself be captured.
I heard this all secondhand
I don’t know if the cake was ever touched
Or if she let him join her forever
Or if they just forgot their plight for a night
I don’t know if they ever made it
To marvel at Mckinley’s height
Despite her saying she couldn’t bear it
.
I like to think he became linked with her the moment they touched
That their retreat into immortality was bloodless and refined
.
I think of them sometimes
When I’m layering the cake
That decades before
One of my ancestors taught his son
How to make.
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There’s such a gentle beauty in this story – love the emotional landscape you’ve painted. 🙂
Beautifully bittersweet with a tenderness that lingers long after the last line. This piece folds love, grief, and transformation into delicate layers, just like the cake it centers on. That closing image is pure poetry: a recipe passed down, carrying a ghost of their story in every tier.