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Rapunzel’s End
by Alex Grehy
Did you imagine a young girl
would live long? How could she
thrive in a tower alone? Her swirling
emotions flooded her mind, then cold
and the frailty of a fast-growing body
deprived of all love and care, left
her grateful when death took her soul.
.
Yet still they came calling,
“Darling, let down your hair!”
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Did you imagine her hair would
be lovely? Do you think she had
water to spare for the washing?
Do you think she conditioned and
combed? Her despair leached her
spirit and left strands lacklustre, though
without scissors, I’ll grant it was long.
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But a witch steeped in spite and basted in
greed is not suited to think these things through.
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Did you know that my webs are silky
and strong? I wove my threads into her
tangled mane, picking out mats, bugs
and grime with my deft, bristled limbs.
Her locks now are golden but my webs made them
grippy and easy to climb. I secured her skull,
in a web, like an egg, then let down her hair.
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The witch was a feast and none mourned her loss,
so the prince came up fearless, lustful…delicious.
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Rapunzel, my treasure, as I witnessed your struggles,
I made a gossamer bower, where you lay with your
anguish and spoke of your dreams. I’m sorry my
listening could not set you free, yet your voice still thrums
in the webs, sighs in the wind, your fame is immortal.
No-one asks of the fate of your suitors, that secret we
spiders captured and stifled, so your legend sings on.
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See how they come calling, “Let down your hair!”
My cunning children will gladly oblige.
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Fiction © Copyright Alex Grehy
Image courtesy of Pixabay.com
More from author Alex Grehy:
Last Species Standing
Alex Grehy (she/her) enjoys writing quirky, thought-provoking horror and is a regular contributor to The Sirens Call and Ladies of Horror Flash Project. Her fiction and essays on being a lady of horror have featured in a range of publications, including Spread: Tales of Deadly Flora. Alex’s first poetry collection, Last Species Standing, which explores mankind’s relationship with nature and technology, is available on Amazon.















What a lovely, dark, atmospheric take on the fairy tale. Really enjoyed this.
Thank you 🙂
An excellent dark twist on the tale, loved it.
Thank you 🙂
Thank you 🙂
So delighted with the dark twist, why didn’t I ever think of that? Brilliant, Alex!!
Thank you! TBH I didn’t think of it either until I saw the prompt – isn’t that the wonder of this project. 🙂
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