The Ladies of Horror
Picture-Prompt Writing Challenge!
The Space Between (Villanelle)
by Alex Grehy
The space between frames, dark between light, pain between smiles.
Wedding day movie, mum beams, dad looks harmless, benign
yet they say that the camera can never tell lies.
Mum wore long-sleeved white satin, damning bruises disguised.
Temper in check, dad’s huge fist pumps in triumph, this time.
The space between frames, dark between light, pain between smiles.
A new reel unwinds. Honeymoon – sun, sea and blue skies
she hides black eyes with big glasses, appeases, drinks wine,
yet they say that the camera can never tell lies
My party, I’m ten, he hurts me, I smother my cries,
he sings happy birthday, guileless, the cake looks so fine.
The space between frames, dark between light, pain between smiles.
Mum hands me a knife, let’s cut, she says. I stab, he dies.
Accident. The home movie shows the fault is not mine,
Yet they say that the camera can never tell lies
So tragic! He was a good man his friends eulogise,
we sneer, our family’s virtue is deceit defined
The space between frames, dark between light, pain between smiles.
Yet they say that the camera can never tell lies
Fiction © Copyright Alex Grehy
Image courtesy of Pixabay.com
More from author Alex Grehy:
After a lifetime of writing technical non-fiction, Alex Grey is fulfilling her dream of writing poems and stories that engage the reader’s emotions. Her work has been featured by a wide range of publications including Siren’s Call, Raconteur, Bookends Review, and Toasted Cheese. One of her comic poems is also available via a worldwide network of public fiction dispensers managed by French publisher, Short Edition. Her ingredients for contentment are narrow boating, greyhounds, singing and chocolate. It is a sweet life, yet Alex’ original view of the world has led to her best friend to say ‘For someone so lovely, you’re very twisted!
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A darkly superb poem.
Wow Sue that was incredible! Powerful, heavy , rhythmic made me have a big sigh at the end. Well done! Xx Camilla
Very well done, Alex! Loved it!
So glad you liked it – after our last “chat” I’ve pledged to write LoH poetry for the next six months – really excited about it. 🙂
Aargh! Just thought of a better line 5 (that has already been reworked a million times) – leaving it here for future revisions!
“Temper checked, dad high-fives and fist pumps, playful this time”