The Ladies of Horror Flash Project – #Horror #author Suzanne Madron @suzannemadron @Sotet_Angyal #LoH #fiction

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Negative Space
by Suzanne Madron

“Are you connected?”
“To what?” he asked. He didn’t take his eyes off the curling mist emerging from where the ocean had once been. What had started out as a walk along the beach had become much more complicated in a matter of minutes.
“I suppose we’re all connected in some way. To something.”
“To everything.”
He nodded. “Yes, that, too.”
“Does it scare you?”
Still he watched the cloud of vapor, unable or unwilling to pull his gaze from it. It curled over the rocks, turning them wet and shiny black, polishing them before moving on. Toward him.
“Does what scare me?”
“The negative space.”
He squinted, searching his memories for where he knew the term. It seemed to fit in this situation, yet not fit at all. “I’m not afraid.”
He could feel a disapproving glance at his back and he winced. Something shifted in the mist. At first tendrils like reaching fingers pushed upwards, followed by larger columns of shapeless exploration. You are afraid, something said from the swirling cloud.
“Should I be afraid?” His voice shook as he said the words, as the mist swirled closer, now reaching toward him.
“Why are you afraid?”
“I’m not.”
A sigh from behind him and a tired chuckle. “All right, then. Of what are you afraid?”
He opened his mouth to answer, then shut it, considering. The mist paused, waiting for him to speak. Try as he might, he couldn’t move.
“I’m afraid of what I’ll see when I turn around.”
“And you fear what is before you.”
He nodded and swallowed hard as the mist began to swirl upward. The columns took on shape, a head, arms, legs. Everything told him to run before the mist could finish its becoming, but he was too terrified to turn around.
When the first being emerged, the spell holding him to the spot was at last broken. He turned and started to run, ignoring the laughter that echoed off the polished rocks. The owner of the voice appeared momentarily startled as he ran toward him, but only for a moment.
The intent had been to push the speaker out of his way, but instead he ran straight into him…. And through him.
He was already dispersing to the ocean winds as the speaker turned. As the man faced him, he was nothing more than wisps of fog. On the next breeze, he was a memory of negative space, a place where a person might once have stood before being returned to the mist.
Fiction © Copyright Suzanne Madron
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About Nina D'Arcangela

Nina D’Arcangela is a quirky horror writer who likes to spin soul rending snippets of despair. She reads anything from splatter matter to dark matter. She's an UrbEx adventurer who suffers from unquenchable wanderlust. She loves to photograph abandoned places, bits of decay and old grave yards. Nina is a co-owner of Sirens Call Publications, a co-founder of the horror writer's group 'Pen of the Damned', founder and administrator of the Ladies of Horror Picture-prompt Monthly Writing Challenge, and if that isn't enough, put a check mark in the box next to owner and resident nut-job of Dark Angel Photography.
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1 Response to The Ladies of Horror Flash Project – #Horror #author Suzanne Madron @suzannemadron @Sotet_Angyal #LoH #fiction

  1. afstewart says:

    Very surreal and spooky.

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