The Ladies of Horror
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An Immodest Proposal
by Amanda Worthington
*Trigger warning: domestic violence; abuse
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Muhammad’s plea to treat women kindly went unheeded
Perhaps men looked upon the curved perfection
Of hip and breast and conceded that
So sinuous a creature must be wicked
It did not keep their hands from seeking the flesh beneath
But they quickly reached the conclusion that such a treasure
Should be kept covered, hidden, under lock and key
Lest other eyes be drawn to the beauty
They had so indelicately stolen
Or bartered for in some back alley of some
Unmarked street
In some territory or other
Does it matter which one?
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But they forgot about the rib around which the feminine was crafted
Bruised and pulled their new acquisitions in an effort to straighten
Cast bodies away when they broke
Might have gone on doing it forever
If decorum did not dictate a wedding
And one day a woman would relent long enough to warrant marrying
Never daring to resist, so afraid of the break
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Most women would do anything not to be broken.
But Fatima was not most women
She became one flesh with the serial raper
And she did it with a smile on her face
For she remembered the rib.
And she was not afraid of breaking
To keep other girls whole.
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She had been pushing back for days now.
It was only a matter of time
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His pain crept gradually in while he slept
In a fit of rage he woke and swung on her
As her neck snapped back, his did the same
And Fatima started to laugh
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They say she wears the pants in the relationship now.
Adorns herself in silk
Keeps him hidden away, covered
No one has seen him in months
No one even remembers his name
But he must be well
Because Fatima is radiant
A covered woman asks her what her secret is
And Fatima whispers something into her ear
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No one throws stones here.
They treat women with kindness
Like their lives depend on it
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With a start, Fatima feels the dream fade
And courage take the place of restraint
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It is time.
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A fantastic poem.
Love this poem so much – the language, the structure and the message