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The Crossing
by Suzie Lockhart
Donald
I stare blankly through the train’s frosted window as light snow blankets the landscape. It is a peaceful scene, however, does nothing to calm the unsettled feeling I have…leaving my daughter with that man.
Madly in-love the two were, Vivian had informed me.
So, naturally I traveled to meet her betrothed. My daughter was a gift later in life. Unfortunately, my lovely wife, Amelia had passed from tuberculosis, before seeing Vivian grow into a woman.
Thus, it was I alone, tasked with helping my only child prepare for upcoming nuptials. She’d only been away at school, studying to be a teacher, for three months when she met the ‘man of her dreams,’ a graduating biology major.
I clearly recall the instant my eyes met Roderick’s steely gaze; I knew he was not a proper man, certainly not for my little girl. Of course, at eighteen Viv was no longer a child. But this man…
Older than her, he presented himself as quite charming; a particular type of charm that belies a darkness beneath. Any rationale man of my age could recognize such an exaggerated facade. And he was cunning. Yes, Roderick was certainly quite cunning, as I discovered in the years that followed.
My daughter quit school after marrying that bastard. It wasn’t long until she was expecting their first child, which Viv miscarried at 16 weeks. Heartbroken and in a weakened state, I immediately booked a train again, to be at her side.
I believe it was fall, and there came an early frost…
The train whistle blows, and I hear the hiss of the steam. It breaks me out of my reverie. I look around the compartment, realizing with a start that I’m alone. I sigh, feeling as if I’ve been riding on this train forever.
My memory isn’t always as sharp as it once was, except when it comes to my wife Amelia, our Vivian, and that horrible monster she married.
Although he’d not yet wanted to start a family, my daughter assured me that he’d taken excellent care of her. Vivian told me how he’d made her breakfast, and a special blend of tea, every morning before heading to work.
The moment I saw my little girl, my heart was seized with pain exclusive to a parent. There was a pallor about her I found particularly concerning; not to mention she could barely get out of bed.
I searched for that ‘special’ tea blend, but initially found only sweet tea and honey. Being a tall man, I opened a cupboard higher up. After a moment, I found that tea. Special indeed.
I’d run an Apothecary for years, so I knew black cohosh and pennyroyal when I saw, and smelled, them.
I presented Vivian with my findings.
We fought.
She screamed at me to leave. I never saw my Vivian again. I just can’t remember why.
During the long train ride home, an early, heavy snowstorm raged. I continually relive the horror of a train rushing towards the one I rode…
.
Vivian
A train whistle blows
From around the bend;
My chance at love
Has reached its end.
One final blow in a moment of rage.
Thirty years pass before my eyes
Realizing the error of my ways.
Consistently too bold
for a life yearned to live
At first it was grand,
Those nights full of passion.
That turned to never-ending days
Until I’d nothing left to give.
Emptiness filled my heart,
As no children I’d borne.
Resigned to my fate,
time to take action
My marriage had failed
Thus no longer mattered.
My wish— to return home
My heart had been shattered,
Roderick nearly destroyed me
Hopes and dreams are scattered.
Through train window snow glistens
Creating an iridescent illusion
which hide hot tears of regret
Turned into snowflakes,
frosted and tattered.
The crossing of trains,
collecting souls as they die.
In that moment I see him—Daddy! I cry
I rush into his arms, so open and loving,
Sensations missed for so long.
That bond of belonging
I don’t care how he’d appeared
How he was here…
Sobbing in sorrow, he held me near
Assured me all would be well
As a tunnel of light
swirling snow does reveal.
.
Donald
My daughter! My world!
Absent from her, I’d been lost
I’d remained on this train
Many a long years!
Now together, I’m found,
Taking her hand
I see what matters:
Smiling as we walk
father and daughter
Into a void filled with peace,
Love and light;
We both leave what lies behind
Escaping the maw
of never-ending night.
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Fiction © Copyright Suzie Lockhart
Image courtesy of Pixabay.com
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A very poignant and superb story.
Good story!
Love the arc of this story and the character voices in a surreal landscape